The Official Writing Challenge
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Such a fun poem to read! I especially liked the repetion reversed in several lines--clever.
07/24/10
I enjoyed this. The style of the rhyme added to the humor. Very creative take on the topic. Great title too.
07/25/10
I like this a lot. Lots of creativity, and the verse was so clever. Loved the idea, and the way you told your story. Impressive!
07/26/10
I enjoyed your well-written poem. What a great take on loving our enemies, blessing those who persecute us.
This is a fun poem with a great message. You are quite talented to come up with these delicious rhymes.
07/26/10
Hehehe I like this. Good rhythm and rhyme.

I kept thinking this was going to be about blue jeans... Isn't or wasn't there a jean bran called Bugle Boy? lol

Loved the ending. And I'm glad Larry came around.
Simply a charm! I had a beat in my head the whole way through.
07/27/10
This was so much fun to read. I was entertained from start to finish with the rhythm of this poem, the message within and of course the characters you created. Great job.