The Official Writing Challenge
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07/23/10
Your title made me smile. You have a great warning wrapped up in this poem. I was thinking "prodigal son" for a bit at the beginning!
This poem should be posted next to every store sign that says we accept Visa. It's so easy to give in to what we want. The funny thing what we need is always here and although it cost Jesus plenty, He offers it to us for free.
07/27/10
Great ending! I enjoyed the message of this poem. Thanks for sharing.
Many of us, including myself, can relate to this poem. I liked the rythem of the rhyme. It moved together nicely.
07/29/10
Authors Note To self:
#17 Overall
#7 In Advanced Level (^.^)
Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level and in the top 30 overall.