The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, my! This is a winner. I can hardly wait to know who you are, dear author. The "kushay" gave the location away before I spotted "Sierra Leone." It's something my husband says when we meet people (he spent time in that part of Africa on short term mission service). Your descriptions are windows for seeing, and your ending brought tears to my eyes.
You held my attention throughout. Great writing.
I was right there with both characters. Touching and well done!
This story is done just right. it has all the ingredients blended together just so to make it a lesson of love, forgiveness and prejudice, and best of all how to overcome prejudice.
Beautifully written with a great message. Well done, indeed.