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07/22/10
Nice re-telling of a familiar story.
07/23/10
Ahhh water....I felt the need to drink deep!
Excellent retelling of a story. I like how you keep your reader unaware of the story behind the story till close to the end. Your descriptions are wonderful.
07/25/10
You certainly know how to pull the reader right into the moment. Excellent!
Excellent, excellent, excellent! You touched the depth of my heart with grieving, anticipation and joy. So well written. You even made me thirsty as I read this! :)
Oops...btw, think your title is P E R F E C T.
This is a great re-telling. I felt like I was right there.
07/26/10
You really brought this Bible story to life. I think the title is just right.
Excellent job! So well told...congratulations.
07/29/10
Wonderful detail, Vonnie! You've packed this with emotion. Congrats on your Editor's Choice award!
07/29/10
Great job, Vonnie. A perfect peek into the travels of the children of God. Awesome. Congrats on your EC!
Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level and in the top 30 overall.
08/05/10
Awesome retelling! Congrats!