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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Taste (07/15/10)

TITLE: Try It, You'll Like it
By Genia Gilbert
07/19/10


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A watermelon, fresh and cold;
It’s juice and flavor sweet,
Calls to mind a backyard, shaded,
Warm sand beneath bare feet.

An old wooden picnic table,
Red slices passed around,
With jokes and giggling summer fun,
Spitting black seeds on the ground.

A double-layer cake of white,
With coconut piled high,
Was my mother’s masterpiece,
That taste still brings a sigh.

Those cakes were made for special times,
Church dinners, kids’ birthdays;
Fluffy icing, luscious goodness,
Flavor-rich in love’s “sweet” ways.

Sensation of my first pizza,
Crusty, hot, dripping cheese,
Stayed with me and left me hungry
For more and more of these.

Friends came along who shared this love
for pizza parlor fun;
Chaotic, laughing teenage scene,
From one new taste begun.

Biting into a fresh-peeled peach
I recall my Grandad’s hands,
As he taught me how to can them,
Indulged “sampling” on demand.

If random foods can touch us so,
I realized, with a start,
Eating is more than lips and tongue,
Taste sometimes involves the heart.


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Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 07/22/10
This poem made me hungry. You drew such lucious pictures of tempting foods. It was a fun read and made me smile and long for some of that cake.
Caitlyn Meissner07/22/10
This was fun to read, and I liked the last line a lot. :)
Lollie Hofer07/26/10
What a sweet poem. The last line was powerful and true. We Mommas put a lot of love in all that we cook for our families.
The Masked Truelovers07/27/10
What better way to write about "taste" than to describe the food itself. Then we can taste it with our minds. And the rhyme was good.


   
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