The Official Writing Challenge
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07/23/10
Wow, I'm so impressed with your perfect villanelle! You've tackled a tricky poetic form and excelled! I love these lines that are the basis of this poem, "I taste the grace thatís boundless in supply. -- Iíve Water from the well that wonít run dry."
07/24/10
This could be a song, with the last stanza as the chorus. Great words!
07/26/10
Absolutely beautiful. Loved the intertwining of grace and water.
What a delicately deep treasure of expression. Very rich!
07/26/10
I love this. Wonderful truths expressed so beautifully and the repeated lines bring home the truth even more. Thank you
This is beautiful and very touching. The best part of all is it is the truth!
07/26/10
Beautiful!
07/27/10
A feast for the soul...one that is a sure winner...for all of us!
07/28/10
A really lovely devotional poem. Thanks for sharing it! Colin
07/28/10
LOVED this! So smooth my eyes just floated from word to word. Beautiful message!
07/28/10
I like the flow of the lovely poem, the message was great as well.
07/28/10
Strike a chord at my heart in expressing gratefulness towards God for His immense love and grace.
10/27/10
Verna, I'm going to feature this gorgeous poem in the Front Page Showcase for the week of November 8. Look for it on the FaithWriters Home Page--and congratulations!