The Official Writing Challenge
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07/23/10
Wow, I'm so impressed with your perfect villanelle! You've tackled a tricky poetic form and excelled! I love these lines that are the basis of this poem, "I taste the grace thatís boundless in supply. -- Iíve Water from the well that wonít run dry."
07/24/10
This could be a song, with the last stanza as the chorus. Great words!
07/26/10
Absolutely beautiful. Loved the intertwining of grace and water.
07/26/10
What a delicately deep treasure of expression. Very rich!
07/26/10
I love this. Wonderful truths expressed so beautifully and the repeated lines bring home the truth even more. Thank you
07/26/10
This is beautiful and very touching. The best part of all is it is the truth!
07/26/10
Beautiful!
07/27/10
A feast for the soul...one that is a sure winner...for all of us!
07/28/10
A really lovely devotional poem. Thanks for sharing it! Colin
07/28/10
LOVED this! So smooth my eyes just floated from word to word. Beautiful message!
07/28/10
I like the flow of the lovely poem, the message was great as well.
07/28/10
Strike a chord at my heart in expressing gratefulness towards God for His immense love and grace.
10/27/10
Verna, I'm going to feature this gorgeous poem in the Front Page Showcase for the week of November 8. Look for it on the FaithWriters Home Page--and congratulations!