The Official Writing Challenge
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07/22/10
You did a great job of answering hard questions without coming across as preachy. The last paragraph really touched me.
07/27/10
Good message about the need for Christ's sacrifice and on-target with topic that we can "taste" the lord's goodness. I would just advise to think about how you could reword some of your sentences.