The Official Writing Challenge
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Oops-whoops! Pronoun blooper! "She" is really "Mrs. Shelton" here:

"This time she seemed to presume the worst by thinking....."
(...in the 3rd paragraph...)
07/16/10
My heart melted for Susanna in this story--and as it unfolded, for Mrs. Shelton too. Good character descriptions brought these two people to life for the reader.
Your story shows clearly how what we often hear is not what is actually meant. Your mc learns a good lesson. The details of description add interest to the story.