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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Hear (07/08/10)

TITLE: Sound of Life
By Dana McReynolds


The person who made these rules must be a compulsive time waster. At least thatís what Rachel thought. A morning spent in a straight-backed chair listening to lectures and watching videos made her wonder if this was actually high school health education all over again. All of it was totally unnecessary. Rachel had excelled in high school and even started college. They werenít telling her anything she didnít know. She just wanted to be done with it. The first day of the rest of her life was waiting.

Clad in a paper-thin gown, Rachel waited on the examination table. ďIs anyone with you?Ē the nurse had asked. She was alone, just as she had been since the first test showed a positive. Rachel knew the next step, an ultrasound to make her fully aware of the living being inside of her. She didnít think it would change anything. Family members and friends were always showing off those grainy pictures of alien-like babies. Rachel thought they all looked the same and this one would look no different.

Rachel never imagined that she would be in this situation. Really, who ever does? She knew John would be scared but still remained hopeful that he would come around. Three months later, hope was running out. Seeking help from her family was out of the question. She was on her own. The only thing worse would be Rachel on her own, with a baby.

The coolness of the gel took Rachelís breath. The tickling of the probe made her squirm. Suddenly an image appeared. Rachel watched the tiny legs kick and thought the scene looked identical to a video she watched earlier. She was touched but not enough to change her mind. This was a time for practical reasoning and Rachelís told her that abortion was best for everyone.

Then she heard it. The sound was much like a horse galloping through the wind. Her babyís heartbeat pierced the very depths of her soul. ďTurn it up,Ē she pleaded.

She was mesmerized by the sound of life radiating from her body. Weeks had been spent preparing for this day. The walls built around Rachelís heart had blocked out the images. She never considered that God would speak to her through a tiny heartbeat.

Suddenly Rachel wanted nothing more than to run from the clinic and never look back. Yet she couldnít get enough of the sound of her babyís heart. It was a sweet melody written by God.

Finally Rachel left the clinic declining further treatment. She didnít know the logistics of the months and years to come, but she was eager to start the journey with her baby. The first day of the rest of their lives was waiting.

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Carole Robishaw 07/15/10
Congrats on the right choice. This was a good, and well-written, story of how God can touch us.
Karen Ward07/15/10
I like it! A touching and original take on the topic. :)
Theresa Santy 07/16/10
Yes, such a melody can only have been written by God.

What a fabulous, and creative take on this week's theme.

I really enjoyed this one.
Ruth Brown07/18/10
Great title. Heartwarming story. I wish all would be affected this way. babies would be saved. Very well written.Blessings,Ruth
Edy T Johnson 07/27/10
Wonderfully creative take on this week's topic---I have to share this with my niece who does sidewalk counseling and shares her joy every time she sees another baby's life saved. You moved me to tears, a sign to me of great writing! Congratulations on your win!