The Official Writing Challenge
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Original point of view! I enjoyed the unfolding of this, David singing to reassure himself as he gathered his stones, but personally I would have stopped at "the most exciting day of his life." Fun! I can see children gathered around a tale teller and listening to this...
The title drew me to this story, as it is the title of one of my favorite books. I enjoyed your amusing retelling of David's story
Who doesn't love, 'Long ago in a land far away...'? I know I do.
What a delightful, fresh story for children of all ages.

Cute remake of a familiar story all kids remember from Sunday School. I can picture this with illustrations for a children's book.
Oh, I like the stones with personalities and voices. What a clever idea for this topic with an original take on an old story!
Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level and for the Editor's Choice.
Well done, Sharon. Lovely, and original, and fun! Congrats on your creativity!
Wow! What a neat, neat story! One for every Sunday School Class. Thanks.