The Official Writing Challenge
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I keenly feel so much of what you write about. This particularly stuck me, "Quickly the minutes, days, and years disappear -- Uncensored, -- All muddled together..." Great word choices, this needs to be read more than once to "hear" your message penned in these thoughts and images!
A lovely poem. Most profound.
It reminds me when God is in the still small voice, May God continue to bless your writing.Ruth
Very creative and moving. You did an impressive job with your words and phrasing, literally pulling me toward the peak of God's peaceful love. Very well done.
This is the second piece in a row where I felt the author was speaking directly to me. My heart has been aching and your words help heal the damage that my brain has done. The piece is really inspirational and beautifully done.

The way you formatting the sentences really gave impact to your words.

Oh to find those moments of solitude where all else is shut out except the voice our souls long to hear.

Excellent and so true.
I agree this is very profound writing. Loved the mysterious feel! Thanks. Colin
Very creative words--written beautifully with a wonderful message
wow. I love the pace of the poem and how the noise is interspersed with the quiet of God's love. brilliant...and I wouldn't have noticed it w/o your hint (too bad we can't format it differently)- but the hidden message w/ the first letter of the lines-- ooh-ooh-wowie.

can I high-five you? that was awesome.
After reading your brick, came back to see the message that you had with each letter on each line.
Very clever!!
Thank you for a very moving poem. God Bless. Thank you.
Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level.
Terry, please send me an email or a PM if you get the chance: jan_ackerson at yahoo dot com. I'd like to feature this piece in the Front Page showcase, but I need to ask you a few things first.