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07/16/10
Excellent writing and powerful message. The Hebrews indeed heard from angels, but did not heed. Today we have heard from Someone greater than angels and therefore we are even more accountable. This powerful warning is presented in perfect poetry.
07/17/10
Very good poetic summation of God's voice to Israel and their response. I like how you ended it with His voice to us. May we be ever obedient.
07/21/10
It was easy to read, very simple to understand. God's word was simply given, and simply received by man's ears. You allow any reader to understand the power of God. thanks!