The Official Writing Challenge
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09/12/05
‘Some things are simply not as they appear.’ Indeed they are not. Thanks for this well written reminder to be grateful for what we have.
09/13/05
Great story, and great reminder. Good job!
09/14/05
You don't need the asterisks; you covered that by saying "Two months after the cruise..." Great job at showing your narrators changing emotions.
09/15/05
This story hits home for so many of us. A great reminder to be thankful for what we have. Thank you!
09/17/05
way to bring the point home. very well written! :-)
09/21/05
Kelly, this was a great entry. The old dissatisfaction bug can hit anyone - the grass always seems greener on the other side. You expressed that view so well, and the fact that it isn't always so. Good work. Also, I wanted to let you know that you were in the semi-finals - so give yourself a pat on the back. Well done! Love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)