The Official Writing Challenge
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‘Some things are simply not as they appear.’ Indeed they are not. Thanks for this well written reminder to be grateful for what we have.
Great story, and great reminder. Good job!
You don't need the asterisks; you covered that by saying "Two months after the cruise..." Great job at showing your narrators changing emotions.
This story hits home for so many of us. A great reminder to be thankful for what we have. Thank you!
way to bring the point home. very well written! :-)
Kelly, this was a great entry. The old dissatisfaction bug can hit anyone - the grass always seems greener on the other side. You expressed that view so well, and the fact that it isn't always so. Good work. Also, I wanted to let you know that you were in the semi-finals - so give yourself a pat on the back. Well done! Love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)