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:( ... heart-breaking, but I know this is reality for some... You did great with the story-line and aha moment at the end!
Just the thought of a father treating his family like that makes me boil. Unfortunately, so many kids want their parents to hear them, and never get that opportunity till it's too late. Thank you for a thought provoking article.
Needs alot of work, but the sentiment was there. It's not of question of anybody listening more of would his father ever hear him. On a realistic note, I don't of a jail/prison where the warden himself would be overseeing the visits. Just a thought. Keep writing.
Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level.
It's so important to get praise and reassurance from our fathers. You did an excellent job showing how easy it is to go down the wrong path if you feel dad doesn't believe in you. Thankfully we have a heavenly father who is always there for us.