The Official Writing Challenge
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I think your creativity is great here. I was completely engaged throughout the story. Nice work!
Scarlet Fury,
what a clever piece. I had to read it a couple of times to get it's full impact. Hearing what our behaviour is saying. Very interesting piece.
Great take on this week's topic. The actions of your mc conveyed her fears and concerns. I liked her. And I liked the twist at the end. Cleverly done and well-written.
This was great. It gave me a big smile. I thought she was doing a good job of annoying the class when they all wanted her to hurry-up. It was a pleasant surprise that there was more to it.
Fresh and believable and on topic.

A fun and original take on the topic. I think I might have been tempted to tear up the paper in front of the professor and throw it at him. Annoyed professor--end of assignment. But I liked your ending better. Good job!
This was creative, fast-paced and fun! I bet this was fun to write...great job!
Very creatively written and entertaining.
great story...did it really happen...beyond your very active imagination?
Great story for the subject.
God Bless. Keep writing.