The Official Writing Challenge
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07/15/10
Very insightful ... and real.
07/16/10
Wow. Very real feeling. Good work.
07/16/10
Scary daughter scene. And yes, unfortunately it does sound realistic. If only more people would learn this lesson in time. Good job!
07/17/10
This was good! I painfully caught glimpses of myself in Susan (which reminds me - great title!). I especially liked your use of "Dr. McCharlatan" - very creative! This is one I wouldn't mind reading again!
07/19/10
Wow! Good intentions just don't always work, do they? Hope your MC's wake-up call came before it's too late. Very good job!
07/19/10
Delusion is so appropriate!
Your story rolled along like a poem which had to be followed.Good writing.Blessings,Ruth
08/05/10
This is intense and so creative. You are definitely a polished writer. I knew I'd find something good, here, after reading the generous comment you left on my "smell" entry. Thank you so much! I look forward to becoming better acquainted.