The Official Writing Challenge
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07/15/10
Very clever!
07/15/10
Loved the message in this poem. Your rhythm, rhyme, and story-telling were artistically done.
Leave it to a lump to turn a deaf ear...nicely done!
Wow this is outstanding. It brought tears to my eyes how often in life I've insisted I know better than the Lord or my parents. This is beautiful.
07/18/10
Enjoyed this greatly. Well written with good meter and rhyme. How often we long to be something we aren't instead of thanking God for just who we are!
This is wonderful. Great imagery, nice pace and metre. A lovely little tale and really well told.