The Official Writing Challenge
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07/15/10
Whoa! I love the uniqueness of this piece. You have written a powerful truth here. One that needs to be heeded. Just this week I was offended by some words I heard. What the person said and what they meant were two completely different things and we were able to sort it all out. Thanks for sharing.
07/15/10
Very creatively written. We do bring a lot of baggage into our relationships that have some unintended effects.
I said, "Wow is this creatively written!"
I meant, "Gee, I wish I had thought of this first."
You heard, "Bravo", I hope.

Good job!
07/16/10
This made me think - which is a mark of good writing. Thank you for this!
This makes me very sad. Wow this is a strong piece that I'm sure everyone can relate to one way or another. My husband and I have very similar exchanges. Thankfully we are slowly learning to ask , 'What did you say?" if we didn't quite get it or it didn't feel right.