The Official Writing Challenge
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07/15/10
I don't think I have EVER read anything as beautiful and wonderful. It takes my breath away. I will never forget the message you made central or the glorious creative excellence of this poem.
You have set the mark so very high. I applaud you.

Mona
07/15/10
Great writing. :)
07/16/10
Absolutely beautiful!
A wonderful command of poetry...and grace.
07/18/10
Beautifully and masterfully written. Your descriptions were exquisite. I, too, often hear God in the beauty of his creation.
Connie:
I think the best critique that I can give you is this: I needed to hear these words today. They ministered to me and reflected back the timely message to simply "be still" before Him.
Thank you.
07/20/10
This is just lovely and so very true. Well done!
07/20/10
Mesmerizing. I enjoyed the repetition, and the well paced progression. Lovely.
07/22/10
Lovely, peaceful descriptions. I could visualize each scene. Wonderful!
07/23/10
I've read your poem several times, each time taking away something new. The progression is wonderful. This is gorgeous in message and poetry.