The Official Writing Challenge
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07/15/10
I like the message of this poem...a good reminder that sometimes there is so much more God wants to do and say, if we are attuned to His voice. Thanks for sharing.
I enjoyed reading the thoughts as well as flow. Very, very nice indeed!
07/16/10
Nice poem, and very true. The box closes so many in focusing on things that God really does not care about. He just wants us to worship Him in spirit and truth.
How true your words are, as well as being beautifully arranged and a soothing meter, if only we listen.
07/18/10
I love poems with this meter. Good message! Blessings,Ruth
Congratulations in placing in the top 15 of your level and in the top 40 overall.
Great images and message
You bless me brother!