The Official Writing Challenge
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Very good analogy of a Bible story. You did a great job of making the story come alive in today's setting.
06/21/10
Very nicely done with the parallel structure. May be me, but I think the last line was unnecessary - told us what you'd already expressed. Enjoyed this!
Congratulations on placing in the top 15 of your level and the top 30 overall.
06/26/10
You did a great job of showing the power of Jesus' love and words - yesterday and today. Great job!