The Official Writing Challenge
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09/14/05
I don't think you needed the quotes. Your story did a fine job of making those points, and using the quotes is like bapping your readers over the head and saying, "Do you get it?" Yep, we got it, and a very nice job you did, too.
09/17/05
Very touching way to introduce the new perspective. Nice lesson!