The Official Writing Challenge
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06/17/10
Amen! Enjoyed this very much.
06/18/10
I could almost hear organ music accompanying your poem! The meter and rhyme are so precise, and the sentiments make me want to lift my hand in praise. I love the repeated stanza - it introduces, and then drives home, the theme. Very nice!
06/21/10
Love the flow of this - and the worshipful tone and message. This made me smile.
06/21/10
I love this line - May His Spirit supply to my pen - lovely inspirational poem.
06/21/10
Loved it! I like how nuch the poet is in Love with The Lord and makes the point of never tiring of expressing it.
06/23/10
Beautiful! I, too, like the way you repeat the first stanza again at the end. It brings the poem full circle. And I especially like the contrast of stanzas 2 and 3. As you lift the Lord in praise in this poem, I feel uplifted also. Thanks for this.
06/24/10
Beautiful poetry. It truly is a privilege to write inspired praises to our Lord. Very uplifting! Nancy
Congratulations on placing in the top 15 of your level and the top 30 overall along with an EC.
Congratulations on placing in the top 15 of your level and the top 30 overall along with an EC.