The Official Writing Challenge
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06/17/10
Amen! Enjoyed this very much.
06/18/10
I could almost hear organ music accompanying your poem! The meter and rhyme are so precise, and the sentiments make me want to lift my hand in praise. I love the repeated stanza - it introduces, and then drives home, the theme. Very nice!
06/21/10
Love the flow of this - and the worshipful tone and message. This made me smile.
06/21/10
I love this line - May His Spirit supply to my pen - lovely inspirational poem.
06/21/10
Loved it! I like how nuch the poet is in Love with The Lord and makes the point of never tiring of expressing it.
06/23/10
Beautiful! I, too, like the way you repeat the first stanza again at the end. It brings the poem full circle. And I especially like the contrast of stanzas 2 and 3. As you lift the Lord in praise in this poem, I feel uplifted also. Thanks for this.
06/24/10
Beautiful poetry. It truly is a privilege to write inspired praises to our Lord. Very uplifting! Nancy
06/25/10
Congratulations on placing in the top 15 of your level and the top 30 overall along with an EC.
06/25/10
Congratulations on placing in the top 15 of your level and the top 30 overall along with an EC.