The Official Writing Challenge
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06/17/10
Cleverly written with lots of humor. Good job.
I don't know if it's a true story or not, but both the writer and wife could have done a better job at compromising and supporting each other. You made it clear that one of the challenges of writing is keeping a happy marriage in the process. I'm divorced by the way :]
06/22/10
Delightfully quirky writing. I liked the image of the generally uninterested wife checking up on the dress sense of the female character, to see if she was "swinging from a silver pole trading flesh for money" Sounds like she wondered if her husband was getting his satisfaction somewhere else...
07/25/10
Stanley, this is delightful, and I'm going to feature it in the Front Page Showcase for the week of August 9. Look for it on the FaithWriters home page--and congratulations!