The Official Writing Challenge
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06/17/10
You are to be commended for your efforts to prevent more unborn babies from being aborted. My earnest prayers for you and your organization. Your article lacks some strong course of action for those wanting to help stop this legal killing of innocent unborn babies. Blessings.
It's a heart-wrenching and quite poignant speech. I could hear the MC's voice choke on a sob every few words.
Your much needed message was presented powerfully. God's heart must be broken at the murder of the innocents.
06/21/10
I'm glad you left a hint--yes, this does have a powerful pro-life message. Thanks for writing it, and sharing!
06/22/10
I enjoyed the heart-searching, looking for the best approach, conscious that the MCs listeners would come from different perspectives.
I stumbled a little on a line early on: "should I deliver to the choir that it had not heard before?" To me the pronoun 'it' sounded a little off, a bit too impersonal. Aside from this, it's good stuff