The Official Writing Challenge
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I really like the poem, structured as a race and then ending with a very appropriate quote from the Apostle Paul! It makes me wonder, were you watching NASCAR or did your inspiration come from the Word?
Very clever analogy - and the pace of this goes so well with it. Very well crafted.
I love the dizzy pace of this poem - I felt like I was racing in circles reading your verse. Excellent!
Loved this -so creatively clever. Really, really good.
Very clever writing. I liked how you finished with the quote from the Apostle Paul about finishing the race. Very appropriate ending. Thank you.
I so enjoyed the pace. I hadn't notice the title at first but I could definitely feel the fast pace, then the title tied it up for me. Great job.
Great analogy with a poem that delivers with dizzying speed.
I like how people liked your work and your confidence evolved. You only need a few bacd knocks and you don't write again.