The Official Writing Challenge
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06/17/10
Really enjoyed your sense of humor! Some days the brain just gets all fogged up. Your rhythm needs some tweaking but you have quite a nice poem here. Blessings.
I love the humor in this piece. It was an easy read that had a nice flow to it. I plan on sharing this one with my family.
I liked the rhyme, the clever way you switched your words, and they way it made me laugh.
This is delightful. I do believe your imp has been to my mind at times as well. This was refreshing and gave me a nice chuckle.
06/22/10
I think those "tips of the slung" are something we can all relate to. The meter and rhyme are very good, and the poem is entertaining and made me smile.
06/22/10
What a delightful piece of writing - loved you poem. Colin
06/23/10
What a fun, clever poem! I write much better than I speak, so I could really (REALLY!) relate to this one. Loved it!
Delightful poetry. I thought it was just me who was tongue-tield all the time. Your imp must have lots of relatives. I love to write, but don't talk very well, at least that's my opinion. Keep writing. God Bless.
06/23/10
An enjoyable poem. Spoonerisms are so funny.
Congratulations on placing in the top 15 of your level.
08/07/10
Oh, I can so relate to this. My family is always telling me what I said verses what I meant to say. Loved the poem. I might just print it and post it in my house for my family to read. :)
Okay, no fancy - shamancy words...this was just all around, GREAT!