The Official Writing Challenge
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06/17/10
Love the imagery in the beginning, and the message at the end. Lovely cadence to this.
06/19/10
Fun and very true! "a tidal wave of words, / Rising up before me / As a flock of angry birds" makes perfect sense to me!
I enjoyed the colorful words and easy cadence. Good job!
06/19/10
I like the similies inserted in each stanza, especially...
"Track errors like a blood hound,
Hunting for the grammar crook."
Well done!
06/20/10
I can relate to this. I'm never stuck for something to write, just how to put it so it'll have the most impact.
06/23/10
I empathized with every lovely turn of phrase. I think my favorite is the the plot circling the page, hovering close to making sense. I feel like the last stanza was too abrupt - instead of concluding, it goes in a different (but awesome!) direction.
Congratulations on placing in the top 15 of your level and the top 30 overall.