The Official Writing Challenge
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06/19/10
This brought a smile to my face. I like the wordplay on Chiche! Very nicely done, I was smiling all the way through the end.

Good job with the bolded letters too!
I so enjoyed the flow and pace of this unique piece. I also smiled at the voice and incorrect grammar Well done.
06/23/10
Quirky - very funky indeed. Enjoyed!
Well done
It's nice to read something on the light side!
Thanks
06/23/10
Cute, fun, and DEFINITELY not cliche'. So creative!
Really excellent fun poem. Trying not to say what you've already read is a challenge.
06/23/10
Mission accomplished--this was anything but trite! Good job!
06/23/10
Great fun! The meter isn't perfect, but your poem is definitely "new and hoppin'" :) The ending prayer was awesome.
How fun! I loved this poem. It made me smile all the way through. :)
06/24/10
Oh my, I loved this! So much fun to read, and not cliche' at all. Awesome!
Congratulations on placing in the top 15 of your level and the top 30 overall.