The Official Writing Challenge
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This brought a smile to my face. I like the wordplay on Chiche! Very nicely done, I was smiling all the way through the end.

Good job with the bolded letters too!
I so enjoyed the flow and pace of this unique piece. I also smiled at the voice and incorrect grammar Well done.
Quirky - very funky indeed. Enjoyed!
Well done
It's nice to read something on the light side!
Cute, fun, and DEFINITELY not cliche'. So creative!
Really excellent fun poem. Trying not to say what you've already read is a challenge.
Mission accomplished--this was anything but trite! Good job!
Great fun! The meter isn't perfect, but your poem is definitely "new and hoppin'" :) The ending prayer was awesome.
How fun! I loved this poem. It made me smile all the way through. :)
Oh my, I loved this! So much fun to read, and not cliche' at all. Awesome!
Congratulations on placing in the top 15 of your level and the top 30 overall.