The Official Writing Challenge
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06/19/10
Love how your title fits this piece. It gives a lovely double meaning to the message.

The rhyme and rhythm is very different, but works just right with the words you've chosen. Thanks for sharing!
06/21/10
I really like the mournful tone of this poem, and I like the structure too. Did you mean "crowded" instead of "crowed" in the 3rd stanza? Either word works, but I think "crowded" sounds better. :) It did fall off a little at the end, but I still like it - ending the distraction-filled day listening and recording to the Song of our Lord. Just lovely poetry.
How true it is that your piece glorifies the King. That is what matters most amidst the distractions of the day, that we take time to hear Him amidst all the chatter.
06/23/10
Liked your poetry that had a lot of meaning to it - some depth to it. Thanks
06/23/10
Just beautiful. The imagery and message are so poignant. This blessed me.
06/23/10
Beautiful poetry with lovely imagery. Enjoyed it very much!
Absolutely beautiful! Loved how how your words and images flowed together. Keep writing. God Bless.
07/17/10
Lovely. I too often find that "midnight song"...