The Official Writing Challenge
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09/13/05
Powerfully written.
09/13/05
Hope you win! This is my choice thus far. Love it! Love it! Love it! Bout time someone wrote about something like this. God bless.
09/13/05
So sad when a relationship breaks down. So true that Jesus is with us always. Powerfully written. Loved the 'room sized hug.' Fourth paragraph confused me - left me thinking the husband was on a life support system.
09/14/05
So heartbreaking! You have a unique style that demands a 2nd and 3rd reading to get all the nuances of meaning. And each reading gets better.
09/17/05
A strong contender. Could be the winner. Very nicely done. Polished and 99% perfect. Well done!