The Official Writing Challenge
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On topic and well written. I enjoyed this from beginning to end.
06/10/10
I love the way Nabeeha quietly—she did not argue with her aunt, yet with strong determination she did what needed to be done. A beautiful portrayal of Nabeeha breaking down barriers, not only for herself, but also for future generations.
This is such a fresh view on the topic. I found myself holding my breath. I also enjoyed the peek into another culture.
06/15/10
Very interesting read! I particularly like the ending which shows clearly the kind of encouragement everyone needs to hold on to in looking forward. Your story conveys the meaning of Hosea 4:6 very well&mdah;My people are destroyed for lack of knowledge.
06/16/10
Really original take. Wonderful creativity here.
Congratulations! This had me holding my breath!!
06/18/10
Congratulations on your highly commended. You captured my imagination in this fast-paced story. Nabeeha is a true hero in this story and a pioneer in her culture. Great job.
Oooo, great story. Loved the look at the culture and you did well keeping me on the edge of my seat.