The Official Writing Challenge
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06/10/10
This is a good story. I enjoyed it.
This took me where I did not expect to go. Good job of drawing the reader in and keeping me interested to the end.
06/15/10
A very touching story for bringing comfort to one facing such a pain. The verse shared and the next verses after Isaiah 54:5 are especially useful too. You've captured the feelings in the story very well.