The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed your very unique take on this. Great job. It speaks volumes.
01/31/05
I really like this! Such a true, important message...and I love the way you chose to present it. Bees, the sting of anger--how clever! I would have never come up with it.
02/02/05
Very clever ,and certainly full of truth! Creative and well done.
02/04/05
I really enjoyed this! You certainly should be applauded for thinking "out of the box." How very creative and a great read! It took me awhile to figure out the name Y.J. I'm assuming it is short for "yellow jacket?" Great work!
02/04/05
Cute and clever! How'd you ever decide to plan a story around a bee? The cleverness frightens me! :)
Great job - Jo
02/07/05
I just want to finally leave a comment on your entry and let you know how much I loved it. You already know that I have my eye on it for the FaithWriters' Magazine. It's such a good message, with such a sting in the tail. Well done lovely lady. Love Deb
Both fun and convicting...a good match!