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A very interesting take on the article. it was quite suspenseful and I was eager to keep reading. There are several editing errors in it, but they can be fixed. If you want to do more with this story, I'll be happy to help with the errors. Otherwise it was a fun read. Good job.
06/14/10
A very good story, leading the reader to the truths revealed in the word of God. I like the humor from the perspective of Chicken Little about the sky falling, but that's very much alien invasion. The title is misleading and somewhat made me question the writer's belief before I began reading. The 2012 doom's day story is based on mayanism beliefs, not Christian. I think changing the title to reflect the Bible truths about the last days would put things right in perspective. Overall, it's a very interesting read.