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Beautiful story. I loved it. It seemed so realistic too. Loved the characters. Awesome.
Great story. Thanks for sharing it.
Awesome story. Great title!
Delightful story--well written. The knowledge that it was true made it even more interesting.
It's a wonderful story and such a great tribute to your feisty red-haired mother. I enjoyed the back and forth and the gradual change of feelings.

I was confused why the Pizza Man's last thoughts weren't italicized like the others. At first I thought it was a description and not his thoughts like earlier in the story.

But other than that mild head-scratch, the story was a delight to read. It's amazing what God can do with us when we listen to him.
Great, loved it. Managed to cover both POVs without an ounce of confusion. Geat account which really moved me. An interesting thought too that the pizza shop owner couldn't believe that a Christian woman could be an attractive one.
Thank you for sharing a wonderful true story about God's love and grace. You have a lovely, Christian mother. God bless you both.
Author's Comment: That place where the italics failed was not intended; simply a big "oops" in formatting.Oh well... :0)