The Official Writing Challenge
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09/12/05
Well done. Your sentences carry a crisp, clean sound, that flows nicely.

I pray the Lord will bring you the employment your family needs. God bless you.
09/14/05
Some minor edits are needed, especially in the first paragraph. But your piece does a wonderful job at showing us your faith through hard times. Thank you.
09/17/05
nicely written.... very good.