The Official Writing Challenge
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06/10/10
I really like how you use the garden analogy in this story. Your story unfolds with a gentle touch and is rich in descriptions. The introduction of the five sisters story could be made into a stand alone story of it's own. Good work!
Beautiful story of God's love among "sisters."
06/15/10
Like it, and have often contemplated the verse mentioned. If I weren't a Christian, there'd be very few in my church alone that I'd have anything to do with. It's only the love of Christ that binds us together.