The Official Writing Challenge
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09/12/05
Cute and somewhat predictable - but a delightful read! Good work.
09/13/05
It was so funny! But could understand where she went when she saw the note..oh how doubts can get us!:)
09/14/05
I suspect that she and Ken will have to have a long heart-to-heart! And I'm curious: if he's taking her on a surprise cruise, when will she pack? (I'm being silly, this is a fun, well-written story).
09/14/05
Lots of good points in this story. Good writing.
Well told and cute story!
09/16/05
Well written reminder not to jump to the wrong conclusions.
09/17/05
"I turned on my heel and fled..." This is great - lol. Great title too.
09/17/05
Very cute -a bit predictable -but very cute!
09/17/05
lol... nice little twist. good job!
09/19/05
Very clever, and I loved her embarassment at the end.
09/19/05
I love the title! Congratulations.
God Bless, Karen
09/20/05
Fun!!!

And CONGRATULATIONS!!!
09/21/05
Lynda, I was delighted to see you in the Winners' Circle again! Well done. Yes, it was a bit predictable - but it was also a fun read and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Way to go girl! Love, Deb