The Official Writing Challenge
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This is excellent. The dialogue is alive and fast-paced. Great work.
Wow, excellent is the only thing I can say. Excellent. Loved it.
Wow! This is lovely Ruth. Such a powerful message, with strong characters & dialogue. Glad to see you back in the challenges.
Extremely well written piece -thanks for sharing.
Love this! Two thumbs up. Nice tight writing. Great ending. Well done Bear
I didn't understand the title until the very end.
Very well written. The dialogue was very well done and well-paced. Keep writing.