The Official Writing Challenge
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Love this conversation. I felt like I was eavesdropping. I would love to read what this author wrote. Oh, I did:) Great title, too.
The previous comment is right. I felt like an eavesdropper. Great dialogue.
I loved the dialogue too! And the reference to some of my childhood memories of Peter Pan and Mary Pippins :)
This story is really well written. It did feel like I was in the room with them. Very excellent work! Stayed on topic and kept my interest.
Interesting, sophisticated conversation. Well done!
Beautiful message. You gave your two characters wonderful 'voices' and dialogue. I loved the poetic quotes and thoughts.