The Official Writing Challenge
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06/03/10
Love this conversation. I felt like I was eavesdropping. I would love to read what this author wrote. Oh, I did:) Great title, too.
The previous comment is right. I felt like an eavesdropper. Great dialogue.
I loved the dialogue too! And the reference to some of my childhood memories of Peter Pan and Mary Pippins :)
This story is really well written. It did feel like I was in the room with them. Very excellent work! Stayed on topic and kept my interest.
06/09/10
Interesting, sophisticated conversation. Well done!
06/09/10
Beautiful message. You gave your two characters wonderful 'voices' and dialogue. I loved the poetic quotes and thoughts.