The Official Writing Challenge
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This was a very delightful piece and clipped right along. It not only was obviously on topic, but you made it SOO universally relatable in describing the struggles of elusive success when others thrive. Your scenes and descriptions are excellent. Best of all, you leave the reader with hope. It doesn't get much better than that.
06/10/10
I particularly enjoyed the opening phone conversation. All very believable and frustrating.
Well done indeed on your Highly Commended. Good writing indeed
So glad you placed - I had to check first thing because I loved this piece. Congratulations!