The Official Writing Challenge
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06/03/10
I love the child-faith expressed in this poem.
I felt like this should be put to music. It would make a beautiful song. Just beautiful.
I liked how you went with the perspective of a child. The innocence and fear expressed in her questions gave me a glimpse at what families would have been thinking when Haman attempted to kill them all. I really liked the rhythm, and, as always, you approached the topic from a different angle. Loved your creativity!
Margaret, this is an extraordinary poem at every level! Not only the content, but your meter is perfect and your rhyme flawless.

I can't wait to read more of your work! What a blessing!