The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh you had my blood curdling! Scary stuff! A pray such a day we'll never see.
There seemed to be a few confusing typos, which made it a little hard to read. But the story itself was amazing. The last sentence summarized the thoughts I'd had through the whole process of rejections, abortions, denied surgeries, and so on. I'm glad you had the MC as disgusted with all those choices based on the moment rather than right and wrong. As a side note, I thought your story worked well with the title. Nice job with that.
06/04/10
FROM THE AUTHOR OF THIS PIECE:

I apologize to my readers and cannot understand what happened to make the weird symbols that appear throughout the story. I have never had that happen before. Hope that the message still comes through.