The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow, what a creative take on the topic. I enjoyed this. Thanks.
I was amazed at how you had so many characters in a short span, but it didn't cause me to loose my interest.
06/07/10
You had me wondering the whole time who Holloway was and why everyone was so afraid of him. I'm afraid it was a little disappointing to find out it was just because he was a bully, but I loved seeing his soft side.
06/07/10
Fast-paced dialogue! Super original and fun to read!
06/09/10
A good sense of humor and a very interesting read! Kept me reading through to the end. Now I understand why an editor's job can be life threatening too. LoL! (",)
06/10/10
HaHa! This had me laughing! :D I could easily see it in a comedy movie. ;)

Awesome job!