The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow, what a creative take on the topic. I enjoyed this. Thanks.
I was amazed at how you had so many characters in a short span, but it didn't cause me to loose my interest.
You had me wondering the whole time who Holloway was and why everyone was so afraid of him. I'm afraid it was a little disappointing to find out it was just because he was a bully, but I loved seeing his soft side.
Fast-paced dialogue! Super original and fun to read!
A good sense of humor and a very interesting read! Kept me reading through to the end. Now I understand why an editor's job can be life threatening too. LoL! (",)
HaHa! This had me laughing! :D I could easily see it in a comedy movie. ;)

Awesome job!