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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: The Editor (05/27/10)

TITLE: I Don't Need no Editer
By harvestgal Ndaguba
06/01/10


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I don't need no editer. Hmph! My work is good.
telling me 'bout spelling errers and writting like I should
People knows just what I means, Ain't that all that matters
words don't have to be all clean and fixed like dainty platters.

I writes from my inner man and makes the world to sea
all the heart felt beauties and things that makes us free
Don't got know time for grammer rules, speling checks and structure
dat editer messed up my work, and cuased my heart to rupcher

T'was nothing wrong wit what I wrote for nothing else will due
he filtered it with grammer rules and now it's all, but true
It lost it's flaver. Lost it's life, he killed my work of art
it just ain't me, no longer free, don't torture me, dapart!

And so I start again on you beloved poem that's true
No editers, no critiguers, no publishers, just You.


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Benjamin Graber06/03/10
LOL! Fun poem!
Maria Egilsson 06/04/10
This was rellie funne and showd klearle wy editer's and prufreders ar necusare.

gud jab and rite on toppik.
lol
Maria Egilsson 06/04/10
You have to read the article to understand my post above.
Brenda Shipman06/06/10
Oh my, too funny!! Great description of someone who does NOT have a teachable spirit! :)
Rachel Phelps06/09/10
This is a great poem. Loved it!
Edmond Ng 06/09/10
We certainly don't have to be perfect to come before God, but that's a different story altogether when we stand before the editor, the critic and the publisher! Interesting approach to 'the Editor' topic. LoL (",)
Gregory Kane06/09/10
I noticed one little typo: shouldn't nothing be spelt nuffin? Aside from that this is one very unique poem!
Beth LaBuff 06/10/10
Erica... I enjoyed your bit of humor in this entertaining poem. Congrats on your Editor's Choice award!
Carol Penhorwood 06/10/10
Well done! Loved it!
stanley Bednarz 06/10/10
Congrates Erica! A unique and original piece.
Joan Campbell06/10/10
What a fun, different read! Absolutely loved it. Congrats on your EC.