The Official Writing Challenge
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Wonderful description of your internal editor. I really wanted to hear more, though! You just whet my appetite with this. (It does need spacing between paragraphs, however.) Good job.
I like that comparison: the editor YOU see and the one everyone else sees. I'd love to see more development of the conflict between you and your "editor". Nice work.