The Official Writing Challenge
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06/03/10
I love it! Love the take on the topic and how you depicted it. Well done.
Wow. It took me a few paragraphs to understand who the editor was, but it seemed that’s what you were going for. I liked the way you presented the topic. It reminded me of C.S. Lewis’ Screwtape letters : ) It amazed me how well you captured the mood of the story, and the ending was a delight. I thoroughly enjoyed your article!
06/03/10
Awesome! I was drawn in from the start - and I LOVED how you developed the characters throughout. Masterful.
06/04/10
Thoroughly despicable! And wonderfully creative to boot.
I got a bit bogged down at the beginning what with your odd names and hexes and drug use. But once you got on to Sasha, the story took off for me and did not disappoint
06/09/10
Interesting perspective! Lucifer is definitely the chief of lies and deception, and his days are certainly numbered. I like the way the story is presented from the angle of the devil before the throne of God, similar to Job 1:6-22.