The Official Writing Challenge
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06/01/10
I really like this story line:) There are some errors, though, that detract a bit from it. I love the thoughts you give us to ponder. Very nice work!
Mel,

I love your story!
I tend to see things on stage and this has the makings of an amazing skit or play -especially for a Women's Conference or Retreat - we need to hear this message!