The Official Writing Challenge
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This was very insightful. Thank you! I especially liked: And they flocked to Him because he inspired fresh hope for everyday life. Fresh hope...that's great!
Noel:
My favourite line is:

“Double vision?” retorted Marlene, our doctrinal detective. “But God has perfect eyesight!”

I love the term "doctrinal detective".

Excellent entry.
05/31/10
Wow, this is well done. I loved "we share his pleasure as our gifting matures". May it be so!
05/31/10
It's amazing how one comment by a small child generated remarkable insights into sin and grace--but so it is with inspiration. Brainstorming can work too... if you're fortunate enough to have a group like this to work with. I enjoyed reading this!
06/01/10
I was greatly encouraged by your devotional. "Out of the mouths of babes" - How many times have we learned valuable lessons through our children and grandchildren? And other insightful friends as well for that matter. Thanks for sharing.
06/02/10
Nice communication of truth through dialogue. Loved how the interaction with the grandchild inspired so much discussion - each member of the group having a different take on it.
Love the title and how the truth of it was carried through your article.
I'm so glad God sees me as He does and as I read it, believe it and receive His perception I gain the faith to walk into His callings.
06/04/10
Makes me wonder if God sees the piece we could have written AND the piece we actually submitted because we were in too much of a hurry and left it all too late...
06/04/10
I could see the bathtime scene, and had to smile at, "proud grandparents can occasionally detect their own bragging..." :) I loved the insight by Andy, "how sin infects whatever we do." You have a great message packed into this inspiring story.